We continue to work on our poetry. Students have a variety of assignments to keep them busy. Today I threw them another curveball. I don’t know why, but they tend to groan when I say things like, “Pick one of your poems, but don’t ask any questions.” Today’s curveball had them removing all of the pronouns from that poem. The idea was for them to think about using specific words and removing words that are unnecessary. It also served as a review lesson on what a pronoun is and what it isn’t. It also gave me a chance to play a little Schoolhouse Rock for a few of the classes.
There was a considerable amount of grumbling as students were forced to go back and revise their work. It did, however, force them to really think about what and how they were conveying their ideas. Students also worked with a partner to help them revise and edit their work. Despite the grumbling, students seem to be very proud of the writing they’ve done.
Students will turn in two poems at the end of class tomorrow. It is entirely up to the students which two poems they turn in. I am going to encourage as many students as possible to turn in their door poem – either tomorrow or later. I’d like to submit them to the Bus Lines contest being run by the Charlottesville Albemarle Transit Authority. If your child turns in a door poem, I will send home a permission slip for the contest.